This pleasure is an illusion;
Now it’s with me,
But soon it will be gone;
Suffering may remain alone.
This pleasure is a mask
That I love to wear
In this life’s comedy
That I consciously live.
But I know; I hate though
Life is suffering;
Suffering is truth,
And truth is suffering.
සතුට මිරිඟුවක්
සතුට හුදු මිරිඟුවක්.
මට පෙනී, මට දැනී
මොහොතකින් එය පිට පනී,
දුකම පමණක් ළඟ තබා.
වෙස් මුහුුණක් මේ සතුට
සොම්නසින් මා පළඳිනා,
මේ විකට රංගනයේ
සබුද්ධිකව මා රඟනා.
එහෙත් මම දකිමි
දුකක් මේ ජීවිතය.
විඳවීම සත්යයක්
මිහිරි තම විඳවීමක්.
Copyright © Oct. 15, Newton Ranaweera
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Beautifully written with poignant words. Pleasure as a mask for life’s suffering being the truth. But… is there never real pleasure in life but always faked emotions, feelings and thoughts? Or are pleasure and suffering two sides of the same coin?
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I think suffering and pleasure are intertwined! I remember reading this poem where happiness was likened to a lightning strike between clouds of despondency! It stuck with me ever since
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Thank you so much for this great comment and the analogue for pain and pleasure!! True, they are intertwined, but we could consider their length of time to see what prevails longer. Your quoted example itself is a fine analogue. Accordingly, pleasure is like ‘lightening’ (faster; exists only a mini-second) whereas pain/suffering is like ‘clouds’, which remain around longer.
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I guess pain lasts longer than pleasure. But could it be a state of mind as well? May be when we are happier time seems to fleet by but when wallowing in despair everything slows down?
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What you say is absolutely true; it could be state of mind, too. Our thought pattern itself is socially constructed. 🙂 Anyway, I have never seen a child birth in which the child smiled or a man with a happy look at the death bed?
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It’s strange isn’t it. Your example is perfect!
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Thank you so much, Marta, for the great comment and the question. Let me think…I would say, personally for me, pleasure just exists a mini second whereas suffering runs like an undercurrent.
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Thank you
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Your pics are amazing 🙏
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Thank you, and I’am pleased to redirect the credit to Pixabay!! 🙂
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Profound
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Thank you, Sakshi!! 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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Well written. I just hope this Mask of pleasure becomes the truth the neverending truth someday
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Thank you, and I hope so, Sona!! 🙂
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Expressed it so well … pleasure is of course an illusion sometimes.. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much for the great comment, my friend!! 🙂
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My Pleasure
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Beautifully written
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Thank you very much for the kind comment!! 🙂
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Powerful & deep piece. God bless you.
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Thank you so much for the read and the great comment, Tammy!! 🙂
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Sure anytime!
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Very beautifully written
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Thank you so much, Nidhi!!
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If pleasure is an illusion, then surely suffering is too. Why don’t you treat both the imposters with equal disdain?
Beautifully written piece though.
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Thank you, Punam, for this friendly suggestion!! We understand things intertextually; based on what we have experienced and are experiencing.
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I totally agree, our experiences colour our opinions. But surely moving on helps. I am sorry I offered unsolicited advice but I can’t see a friend suffering.
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The pieces of advice friends suggest “at times of our falls” are really fine. In addition, dialogue helps for self and social transformation. Thank you again!! 🙂 🙂
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You are welcome, dear friend. We all fall to get up again. I agree, dialogue is always important.
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Thank you, and you are welcome!! 🙂
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And all is sad but true. 😍
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Thank you for sharing your understanding of the issue!! 🙂
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Profound!
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Thank you so much for this complement!! 🙂
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Interesting
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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A bitter truth, indeed. 🖤
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Sure, ‘pleasure principal’ does not allow us to accept this truth. Thank you for this great comment!! 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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There is great validity to your observation that suffering is truth, i.e. that truth can be extremely painful to bear, and that suffering teaches us profound truths about life.
Christians would add the following: First, that God is with us in suffering (Matthew 28: 20). We are not abandoned by Him. Second, that suffering is not without purpose, even when that purpose is not obvious to us (Isaiah 48: 10). It refines our character and helps us mature, transforming us into Christ’s image. Indeed, our suffering reflects both Christ’s death and resurrection (2 Corinthians 4: 10). Third, that God will ultimately administer justice for innocent suffering (Genesis 18: 25).
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Thank you so much, Anna, for this detail comment with clear references, which convincingly prove your argument!! 🙂
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Splendid poem. Pleasure is temporary where suffering can last forever.
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Truth is Freedom…….It is letting GO of the past. It is knowing Your worth.
To be truly ‘FREE’ we need to LOVE. We are all beautiful Souls, we are all worth a beautiful Journey
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True, ‘we need to love’. Thank you for reading and writing a great comment!! 🙂
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I see words with weight but without the understanding of the true nature of suffering
it is as if the writer has never felt such
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Thank you so much for this prompt so I can say my personal experiences of suffering! However, my attempt in this verse was not to represent any authentic piece of experience as an example for suffering (and for which there are enough examples in my poetry blog). My intention was to present for discussion about peoples’ attitudes to the concept of suffering. Some deny it, and they promote pleasure, being indulged in physical pleasures. Thank you again. 🙂 🙂
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