Father though I’m, who set their bread,
Their mother you’re; you care them all.
When night and day harder you work
While giving that love, I used to own,
To the children of mine, love fills in my heart
Greater than the day I met you first
And gets me closer and closer to your heart.
When you sit beside and kiss my head,
Fragrance of yours that’s often smelt
On my infant son’s face, makes me a devotee
Of the temple of yours, and then I feel
Not you as my lover, but a great, great mother.
Translation to Maestro Amaradeva’s ‘Though I’m their father’ (I published this , first, on November 11, 2016. I thought of publishing it again with new edits.)
Copyright © August 6, 2019, Newton Ranaweera
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My pleasure
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Beautifully expressed
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Beautiful!
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Oh am touch by this poem. this blew me away. Thank you for taking the time to share these poem through these words.
These words are painted in truth, experience and perspective. I especially love how you started it and how you ended the poem. Beautifully written and as I read through again on each line I was amazed . Each words you used are true
This produced a smile on my tired face after a long day. You’re appreciated.
You are welcome
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Peace ✌and Love ❤
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This is such a sweet way to express greater love a man shows to his caring wife 💚💚
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It is very pretty, I am going to reblog this for you.
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Thank you for reblogging! I feel I’m too honoured. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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not enough is said in praise of mothers. Thanks for giving it some star thought. 🌱
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Thank you so much for this great comment. Mine is a translation!! 🙂
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Yes. Well done 💫
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Thank you again, and you’re greatly welcome!! 🙂
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A very powerful and emotive penning. Excellent!
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Thank you so much for this great complement, Lance!!
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A great pleasure, Newton.
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Really touched reading it. beautiful poem
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Thank you so much for this great comment for my translation!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Akshay!!
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Wow..loved it.
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