I would love a poem that’s born in a kitchen
And slyly creeps as fumes through the chimney,
with a true tale of its creator, who softly sings,
Being aptly wrapped with her joys and mourns.
I would love a poem that’s duly born in a field
And mixes with breeze through sweat and mud,
With a true tale of him who sings while at work,
And dreams to live a better life with fellow folk.
I would love a poem humbly born in a cozy room,
But in dedication to them as a flower in full bloom.
Copyright © Dec. 2, 2018, Newton Ranaweera
Image source: Pixabay
Lovely😍
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Thank you so much for your read and the great comment!! 🙂
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Youre welcome😍
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Awesome poem!
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Thank you so much for the great comment!! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Alessandria today.
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Thank you so much for reblogging this in your blog!! 🙂
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Love the way this flows …btw where was this born 😀
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Thank you, Sakshi, for this wonderful read and the comment. Yet, mine was not born in a cozy room!! 🙂 🙂
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Haa haaa …….there is no right place for poetry ….. It sometimes strikes in weirdest places. My pleasure
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Thanks, and you will ever be welcome!! 🙂
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These are such beautiful lines👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you so much for this wonderfully great comment!!! 🙂
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Sei stato nominato al Sunshine Blogger Award 2018 è un premio dato ai blogger dai blogger che con i loro post ispirano curiosità, interesse e positività!. Per partecipare vedi il post su Alessandria today: http://alessandria.today/2018/12/03/alessandria-today-e-stata-nominata-al-sunshine-blogger-award-2018/
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Thank you so much for nominating me for the Sunshine Blogger Award. I would consider this as a great honour!! 🙂 🙂
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How pure 🙂
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Thank you so much for the great comment!! 🙂
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A beautiful poem about the creation of poems and about the places, situations and especially people that inspire them; people who suffer in their hard lives but also rejoice. I like how the initial wish of your poem ends up becoming a reality having paid a tribute to these people. Love the flow of the whole poem and the beauty of the rhymes in the two last verses.
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Thank you so much, Marta, for your kind read and this wonderfully great comment!! I wonder how you find words – such genuinely kind words – to appreciate others’ work!! Thank you again. 🙂
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You are very welcome, Newton. I am glad you like my comment. I just tell what I think and feel.
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“Spontaneous overflow of powerful of emotions,” when not controlled, are so interesting. Thank you again for having such a kind heart!! 🙂 🙂
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Love how this flows. Mine are usually born in the kitchen. 😀
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Then this verse is a fitting attribute to your poems. Also, thank you so much for this great affirmation!! 🙂
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Aww! That is so kind of you to say. Thank you and you are so welcome. 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Marvellous! ❤️
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Thank you very, very much for your read and the comment!! 🙂
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My deepest pleasure.🤗
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I loved this. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Anna, for the comment!! 🙂
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And I love a poem born in these lines so beautifully 😊
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Thank you so much, and I love your lines of appreciation! 🙂
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I liked the idea that poem can be created at any place, any moment! Well done 😊 and thanks for the “follow”
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Thank you so much for this great comment, and your follow!! 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Really great. Envy you. Keep up.
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Thank you very much for this great complement!! 🙂
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